Pi Leo Academy · Year 4 English

Writing and editing

33 questions and practical tasks · Victorian Curriculum English Version 2.0 · Level 4 · VC2E4LY11

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Open responses, handwriting and spoken tasks need adult review. The models are examples; different responses may meet the criteria.

Question 1

Example response / review guidance: Possible final story: Ella planted the bean beside a short stick instead of the tall stake. After two weeks, the vine curled around the stick and reached into empty air. Ella wondered whether it needed something else to climb. She placed a longer stake beside the plant and loosely guided the stem towards it. Within days, the vine had begun to wind around its new support. Ella labelled the pot 'Climber' and checked the other plants. Her small mistake had helped her notice how differently plants grew. Possible edits: add 'reached into empty air'; delete an unrelated sentence about her breakfast.

Revising should improve what the reader understands, not simply make the text longer.

Review criteria
  • The mistake leads logically to the discovery.
  • The added detail clarifies the story.
  • Adult sees a deletion with a sensible explanation.

Question 2

Example response / review guidance: Morgan helps children cross near the school each morning. Before the crossing opens, Morgan checks that the path is clear and puts on a bright safety vest. The job requires careful observation and clear signals. Morgan enjoys greeting families and knows that a friendly welcome can help children start their day well. Revision decision: Keep the safety preparation beside the explanation of the job, before the sentence about greetings.

Grouping related details gives a profile a clear focus and flow.

Review criteria
  • The profile includes role, preparation, skills and enjoyment.
  • Facts come from the fictional notes.
  • Adult checks that the revision decision concerns the order of ideas.

Question 3

Example response / review guidance: Our class should display student book reviews near the library door. Reviews can help readers find books that match their interests. They also give students a real audience for their writing. We could begin with four reviews each fortnight and replace them regularly so the display stays useful.

Revision strengthens an argument by replacing repeated opinions with reasons and workable details.

Review criteria
  • The repeated claim has been removed.
  • Two different reasons support the display.
  • Adult checks the proposed next step is practical.

Question 4

Example response / review guidance: Subject: Request to display Year 4 recycling posters Dear Community Centre Team, Our Year 4 class has created posters explaining how to sort common classroom waste. We would like to share six posters with people who visit the centre. Each poster is A4 size, and our teacher could arrange delivery and collection. Would it be possible to display them for two weeks next term? Please let us know if there are size limits or other display requirements. Thank you for considering our request. Kind regards, The Year 4 class Revision: 'Can we put stuff up?' became the specific display question.

A request is easier to answer when it supplies relevant details and asks a focused question.

Review criteria
  • The email identifies the class, purpose and display requirements.
  • The recipient has a clear question to answer.
  • Adult reviews one revision that improves precision or appropriate formality.

Question 5

Example response / review guidance: First, we collected clean pots. We filled them with soil and put seeds into it. After watering the pots, we placed them by the window. I moved collecting the pots to the beginning because the other actions depend on having pots.

Reordering improves the logic of a paragraph; connectives make the order explicit.

Review criteria
  • Adult checks that every original action remains.
  • The sequence is practical and clearly linked.
  • The explanation identifies a useful move.

Question 6

Example response / review guidance: The Year 4 art exhibition is on Thursday in the school hall, from 3 pm to 4 pm. Families are welcome to view our paintings and models. I removed the lunch detail because it does not help families attend the exhibition.

Editing for purpose means adding essential information and removing unrelated material.

Review criteria
  • The revised announcement includes event, location and full time.
  • Unrelated material is removed.
  • Adult checks the deletion is explained in terms of the reader's needs.

Question 7

Example response / review guidance: Suri stepped into the dim storeroom. Stacked chairs leaned against one wall. Behind a cardboard box, she spotted a small brass bell and lifted it carefully.

Precise nouns and details give a reader a clearer picture without changing the event.

Review criteria
  • The character still enters a room and finds an object.
  • At least two vague words have more precise replacements.
  • Adult checks the new setting detail supports the scene.

Question 8

Example response / review guidance: The rabbit escaped from its pen. It hid behind the compost bin. The small animal waited there until Zara brought some food. Then it hopped back into the pen.

Pronouns and related references can improve flow when the reader can still identify their meaning.

Review criteria
  • All original events remain clear.
  • The revision uses a pronoun and another reference to the rabbit.
  • Adult checks that no pronoun could be confused with Zara.

Question 9

Example response / review guidance: Before you begin painting, cover the table. Put on an apron, then collect your brush. If the paint is too thick, ask the teacher whether a little water can be added. Wash the brush when you finish.

Connectives should express real relationships between actions, not simply decorate sentences.

Review criteria
  • The table is protected before painting begins.
  • The condition about thick paint has a matching action.
  • Adult checks that the revision keeps all essential steps.

Question 10

Example response / review guidance: 'Where is the class map?' asked Ravi. 'It's beside the window,' replied Elise. 'Thanks! I'll bring it over,' Ravi said.

Dialogue punctuation separates spoken words from the narrator's reporting words.

Review criteria
  • Adult checks that only the spoken words are inside speech marks.
  • The question mark and statement punctuation fit the speech.
  • Each new speaker starts a new paragraph.

Question 11

Example response / review guidance: 'If we leave now,' said Mina, 'we will reach the oval before the bell.' 'I'll carry the cones,' replied Joel.

When a reporting clause interrupts one spoken sentence, the punctuation shows that the sentence continues.

Review criteria
  • The reporting clause remains between the two parts of Mina's sentence.
  • Adult checks the commas, speech marks and lower-case continuation.
  • Joel's reply is on a new line with clear punctuation.

Question 12

Example response / review guidance: Ms Patel said that the class was ready for the exhibition. She explained that the students had worked carefully on their models.

Reported speech communicates the message through the writer's sentence rather than quoting exact spoken words.

Review criteria
  • Both messages are retained.
  • Speech marks are removed and references/tense suit the report.
  • Adult checks the report does not add a new opinion.

Question 13

Example response / review guidance: Possible dialogue: 'I can bring two spare rulers tomorrow,' said Alex. The report gives the meaning, but it does not preserve every word Alex actually used.

Converting a summary into dialogue involves composing plausible words, not recovering a guaranteed quotation.

Review criteria
  • The possible speech preserves the offer and timing.
  • Adult checks speech marks and punctuation.
  • The learner recognises that the original wording is unknown.

Question 14

Example response / review guidance: Dear Museum Educator, Our class is planning a visit. Could you please tell us what time the museum opens, where we should meet our guide and whether there is a place to eat lunch? Thank you for your help. Kind regards, The Year 4 class

Editing for formality means choosing language appropriate to the reader and the relationship.

Review criteria
  • All three questions remain clear.
  • The tone suits an adult outside school.
  • Adult checks that greeting and closing match the request.

Question 15

Example response / review guidance: Hi! We decided that our group will meet by the library door on Monday at lunch. Please bring your sketch so we can choose a design together. I'll see you there!

Less formal language can preserve precise information while sounding natural between classmates.

Review criteria
  • Place, time and required item are all retained.
  • The message sounds friendly and natural.
  • Adult checks that clarity has not been lost when shortening the notice.

Question 16

Example response / review guidance: School Garden Snails Snails are small animals found in our school garden. Body They have soft bodies and carry shells. Their feelers help them sense their surroundings. Movement and shelter They move slowly across damp surfaces. During dry weather, they shelter in protected places.

A report is easier to use when related information is grouped under headings.

Review criteria
  • The opening identifies the subject.
  • The two headings accurately describe their sections.
  • Adult checks that all original facts are included without unsupported additions.

Question 17

Example response / review guidance: Place the tray on the table beside the box. Put the glue bottle inside the box so it will not roll off the table. Leave the tray on the table for the next group. I named the glue bottle so the reader knows which item goes into the box.

Repeating a precise noun is useful when a pronoun could refer to several different objects.

Review criteria
  • The position of each object is clear.
  • Ambiguous references are replaced where needed.
  • Adult checks that the explanation identifies a genuine ambiguity.

Question 18

Example response / review guidance: Hana noticed that the model bridge sagged in the middle. She and Callum folded two spare strips of card into strong supports and fixed them underneath. They tested the bridge with one block, then two. This time it held, and they carried it carefully to the display.

A convincing resolution shows the actions that produce success.

Review criteria
  • The solution addresses the sagging bridge.
  • At least two purposeful actions explain the success.
  • Adult checks that the ending follows from the problem rather than coincidence.

Question 19

Example response / review guidance: The reading area has soft floor cushions, a low shelf of books and a lamp for cloudy days. Students can choose a book easily, then settle on a cushion. The lamp helps keep the pages clearly visible when the room becomes dim.

Concise editing preserves useful meaning while removing unnecessary words.

Review criteria
  • The three features remain: cushions, low shelf and lamp.
  • The revision is approximately 35–45 words.
  • Adult checks that repeated or empty wording has been removed.

Question 20

Example response / review guidance: Our class should try reusable labels for storage tubs. They can be changed when the contents change. They also reduce the need to print new labels each time. Let's test them on three tubs for a month.

A clear argument structure helps readers connect the opinion, reasons and proposed action.

Review criteria
  • The opinion comes before supporting reasons.
  • Both reasons remain together.
  • Adult checks that the final sentence proposes the trial.

Question 21

Example response / review guidance: Before the visitors arrived, we set out the chairs. While they watched the demonstration, we explained our model. After they left, we packed everything away. 'After' in the first sentence wrongly suggested that we prepared the seating too late.

A connective changes a reader's understanding of when an action happens.

Review criteria
  • Preparation, demonstration and packing occur in the correct order.
  • The revised connectives match those relationships.
  • Adult checks that the explanation identifies a specific changed meaning.

Question 22

Example response / review guidance: 'The exhibition is ready,' said Mila. She explained that the class had checked every label. The teacher said that families could enter at three o'clock.

Quotation marks identify exact spoken words, whereas reported messages belong within the writer's sentences.

Review criteria
  • Mila's exact words are punctuated as direct speech.
  • The two reported messages do not have speech marks.
  • Adult checks that the original meanings are unchanged.

Question 23

Example response / review guidance: Place all twelve picture cards face down in three rows. Players take turns turning over two cards. If the pictures match, the player keeps the pair and takes another turn. If they do not match, turn them face down again. When no cards remain, the player with the most pairs wins.

Editing from a new reader's perspective reveals assumed knowledge and missing steps.

Review criteria
  • The starting layout is clear.
  • The turn rules explain both a match and a non-match.
  • Adult checks that the winning rule follows the play instructions.

Question 24

Example response / review guidance: Possible final account: Our class tested paper bridges on Friday. Each group balanced a folded sheet between two books, then added blocks one at a time. Our first bridge bent after three blocks, so we added folds and tried again. It held seven blocks on the second attempt. We learnt that changing the shape could make the same paper structure stronger. Edits: add the testing method; delete an unrelated weather comment; move the learning sentence to the end.

Different revision actions solve different problems with content and structure.

Review criteria
  • Adult sees an addition, deletion and sentence move in the draft or notes.
  • Each change has a reader-focused explanation.
  • The final account is coherent and keeps related ideas together.

Question 25

Example response / review guidance: Our library corner sits beside a wide window. Low shelves hold picture books and short novels. A blue rug marks the space where we gather to listen to stories. In the afternoon, sunlight falls across the cushions, making it a peaceful place to read. Possible repair: practise a crowded word, then leave clearer spaces in the final copy.

Feedback about actual readability gives handwriting revision a specific purpose.

Review criteria
  • Adult compares the two physical copies rather than typed text.
  • Any unreadable words are clarified in the final copy.
  • Joins and spacing support readability throughout the paragraph.

Question 26

Example response / review guidance: Possible goal: I will leave a clearer gap between words when I write a full paragraph. Possible evidence: Both copies are readable, but the second copy joins the last letter of one word too closely to the next word.

Comparing real samples helps set a useful fluency goal without treating speed as the only measure.

Review criteria
  • Adult views both handwritten samples.
  • The comparison uses observed letter formation, joins or spacing.
  • The goal is specific and achievable; no automated or timed fluency grade is used.

Question 27

Example response / review guidance: Page title: Join the School Choir First section: Who can join and when rehearsals occur. Second section: What to bring to the first rehearsal. Links: View rehearsal times | Read the choir information sheet | Return to music activities. I replaced 'Click here' with destination names so readers can choose a useful link.

Editing a digital text includes navigation and information order as well as sentence wording.

Review criteria
  • All three link labels describe destinations.
  • Joining information comes before background detail.
  • Adult checks the explanation identifies how a change helps a new visitor.

Question 28

Example response / review guidance: Headline: Bring a Book to Swap Details: Friday lunchtime, Room 4. Choose a book in good condition and ask at home before bringing it. Layout: Put the event title in the largest type at the top. Place time and location directly beneath it. Use one small book illustration beside the instructions. I made the title most noticeable so readers know the purpose immediately.

Visual revision changes what readers notice first and how easily they find practical details.

Review criteria
  • The title, time and place are easy to locate in the plan.
  • The illustration supports the event without overpowering the information.
  • Adult checks the salience choice is explained.

Question 29

Example response / review guidance: Before the swap, students ask at home before bringing a book they no longer need. The class checks that each book is complete and in good condition, then groups the books on labelled tables. During the event, students browse calmly and choose according to the agreed turn-taking rules. If two readers want the same book, a teacher helps them use a fair method to decide. Afterwards, the class returns any unchosen books to their owners and tidies the tables. Revision: Add the permission step before collecting books because it is essential preparation.

A complete explanation accounts for preparation, possible problems and what happens afterwards.

Review criteria
  • All three stages are clear and connected.
  • The conditional sentence addresses a plausible event.
  • Adult checks a revision improves essential content or order.

Question 30

Example response / review guidance: The class model was due after lunch, and Niko's cardboard roof kept sliding off. Everyone else seemed busy. He tried another strip of tape, but it curled away from the edge. 'Could someone hold this while I attach it?' he finally asked. Asha looked up. 'I can hold it, but perhaps it needs a wider support too.' Together they folded two tabs beneath the roof and fixed them to the walls. This time, the roof stayed in place. Niko thanked Asha and helped her carry a tray of model trees. When the teacher admired the finished building, Niko explained both contributions. Asking for help had made the model stronger and left time for him to help someone else. Possible revision: clarify what the tabs attach to.

A narrative's theme emerges through connected choices, actions and consequences.

Review criteria
  • The request for help affects the resolution.
  • Dialogue is clearly punctuated and advances the story.
  • Adult reviews a specific revision for reader understanding.

Question 31

Example response / review guidance: Dear Teacher, I would like our class to create a welcome booklet for new students. It could explain everyday routines, which would reduce uncertainty on the first few days. It could also introduce places to get help, making it easier to ask questions. Small groups could each prepare one page about a useful topic, such as borrowing equipment or finding the library. We could check the information together before making the final booklet. A new student could then tell us which pages were helpful and what was missing. Please consider giving us some class time to try this project. Kind regards, A Year 4 student

A purposeful proposal links benefits, an achievable process and appropriate language for the decision-maker.

Review criteria
  • Two distinct reasons support a specific project.
  • The plan explains who could do what.
  • Adult checks the learner can identify a tone-related revision or explain why the existing tone suits the audience.

Question 32

Example response / review guidance: Title: A Bridge Made from Paper Explanation: Our group explored how folds affect a paper bridge. We placed the same sheet between two supports and tested it with small blocks. A flat sheet bent quickly, while a folded version held more blocks in our test. The project helped us see how changing a material's shape can change its strength. Caption: Our folded bridge during its final test. Links: Read our testing notes | Return to the class exhibition. Layout: Put the photo beside the explanation. Revision: explain the test before reporting its result.

A digital exhibition combines clear explanation, meaningful images and navigable structure for an unfamiliar audience.

Review criteria
  • The explanation gives enough context for a new visitor.
  • Caption and image placement support the content.
  • Adult checks both links and one visitor-focused revision.

Question 33

Example response / review guidance: 1. Text: The class wanted a path through its pretend town. Image: wide view of scattered block buildings. 2. Text: One road was too narrow for the toy bus. 'It cannot fit,' said Kim. Image: close-up of the blocked bus. 3. Text: Jo suggested moving the library. Kim worried it would hide the park. Image: both proposed places. 4. Text: Together they turned the library sideways. A space opened beside it. Image: hands repositioning blocks. 5. Text: The bus rolled through, and the park stayed visible. Image: bus travelling along the new road. 6. Text: They named it Together Street. There was room to keep building. Image: wide view of the finished town. Revision: make page 4 show exactly how the space is created.

A picture-book plan distributes story information across words, images and page turns.

Review criteria
  • All six pages form a complete, connected story for younger readers.
  • Illustrations contribute information rather than merely decorating the text.
  • Adult checks that a revision strengthens clarity or the relationship between image and words.