Pi Leo Academy · Year 4 English

Writing and editing

6 questions and practical tasks · Victorian Curriculum English Version 2.0 · Level 4 · VC2E4LA05

Questions with a separate answer key and review guidance.

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Answers and review guidance

Open responses, handwriting and spoken tasks need adult review. The models are examples; different responses may meet the criteria.

Question 1

Example response / review guidance: Visit to the Discovery Centre When and where: Our class visits on Thursday 14 May, leaving school at 9:15 am. What to bring: Pack lunch, a water bottle and a hat. Returning to school: We expect to return at 2:30 pm. Navigation links: Packing checklist | School excursion calendar.

Digital headings and descriptive links help readers locate information and predict where a link will lead.

Review criteria
  • The page groups all supplied details logically.
  • Both link labels predict their destinations.
  • Adult checks that headings are more useful than vague labels such as 'More'.

Question 2

Example response / review guidance: Home: welcome and latest reading news. Book Reviews: student recommendations grouped by genre. Reading Challenges: current optional activities and instructions. Library Help: borrowing and renewal information. Keep the same menu on every page, including a clearly labelled Home link, so readers can return easily.

Consistent menus and descriptive labels help readers predict and control their route through digital text.

Review criteria
  • The four labels lead to distinct, useful content.
  • A return route is available from every page.
  • Adult checks that labels suit children using the site.

Question 3

Example response / review guidance: Title: Our Growing Classroom What we planted: The class planted herbs in three large tubs. We record changes each Friday. How families can help: Clean, spare plant labels are welcome; please speak with the teacher first. Link: Read our weekly garden observations. Place a labelled photo of the tubs beside 'What we planted' so families can connect the description with the garden.

A useful digital page links headings, images and navigation to the reader's needs.

Review criteria
  • The text has a clear audience and grouped information.
  • The link label describes its destination.
  • Adult checks the photo placement helps explain a particular section.

Question 4

Example response / review guidance: Page title: Join the School Choir First section: Who can join and when rehearsals occur. Second section: What to bring to the first rehearsal. Links: View rehearsal times | Read the choir information sheet | Return to music activities. I replaced 'Click here' with destination names so readers can choose a useful link.

Editing a digital text includes navigation and information order as well as sentence wording.

Review criteria
  • All three link labels describe destinations.
  • Joining information comes before background detail.
  • Adult checks the explanation identifies how a change helps a new visitor.

Question 5

Example response / review guidance: Title: Choose Your Reading Activity Start here: Pick one activity that interests you. Read and Draw: Create an illustration of a scene you have read. Recommend a Book: Write a short review for a classmate. Explore New Words: Collect and explain three interesting words from a text. Place a simple image of an open book beside the title. Keep the three links in an evenly spaced list below the starting instruction.

A digital choice page needs descriptive destinations and a clear starting point.

Review criteria
  • The three linked activities are distinct and clearly described.
  • The starting instruction and layout guide the reader.
  • Adult checks that the image supports the page without obscuring navigation.

Question 6

Example response / review guidance: Title: A Bridge Made from Paper Explanation: Our group explored how folds affect a paper bridge. We placed the same sheet between two supports and tested it with small blocks. A flat sheet bent quickly, while a folded version held more blocks in our test. The project helped us see how changing a material's shape can change its strength. Caption: Our folded bridge during its final test. Links: Read our testing notes | Return to the class exhibition. Layout: Put the photo beside the explanation. Revision: explain the test before reporting its result.

A digital exhibition combines clear explanation, meaningful images and navigable structure for an unfamiliar audience.

Review criteria
  • The explanation gives enough context for a new visitor.
  • Caption and image placement support the content.
  • Adult checks both links and one visitor-focused revision.