Year 4 English · Set 1 of 3

Writing and editing

10 questions and tasks · VC2E4LE05. Take your time, then check your work below.

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Question 1Creating an intriguing opening · support

Write a 4–5 sentence story opening set at a school gate just before a storm. Introduce a character, use two senses and finish with a reason to keep reading.

What to aim for

Adult checks that the place and character are clear.
At least two sensory details establish the stormy setting.
The last sentence introduces a story possibility.

Response or adult observation notes

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Question 2Showing character feelings · core

Create a 4–6 sentence scene showing a character who is nervous about returning a borrowed book. Show the feeling through action and thought without using 'nervous' or 'scared'.

What to aim for

Adult identifies the feeling from clues in the writing.
Actions and thoughts both reveal the character.
The scene has a clear situation and a purposeful final action.

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Question 3Dialogue that develops character · core

Write a conversation of 4–6 spoken turns between two children who discover an unfamiliar key in a garden. Give them different ideas about it and punctuate the dialogue.

What to aim for

Adult checks the characters offer different ideas.
Speech marks enclose each spoken turn and punctuation suits statements/questions.
A new speaker begins a new paragraph.

Response or adult observation notes

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Question 4Sequencing narrative events · support

Write one paragraph about a child who misses a bus and finds a safe solution. Use 'after', 'while' and 'eventually' to link events in a sensible order.

What to aim for

Events form a plausible sequence with a safe solution.
All three connectives fit their meanings.
Adult can follow the paragraph without guessing what happened between events.

Response or adult observation notes

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Question 5Developing a character dilemma · core

Write a short scene in which a character must choose between winning a game and being fair. Include the choice, the action and a consequence.

What to aim for

Adult can identify two competing choices.
The character makes a decision rather than being rescued by coincidence.
The consequence follows from the choice.

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Question 6Building suspense · core

Write 5–7 sentences about finding a mysterious box during a shed clean-up. Build suspense before revealing an ordinary, believable object inside.

What to aim for

The object is not revealed immediately.
Adult notices at least two clues or suspense-building choices.
The reveal is believable and connects with earlier details.

Response or adult observation notes

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Question 7Using viewpoint to shape setting · core

Describe the same empty playground twice: first through the eyes of a child looking forward to a game, then through the eyes of a child missing a friend. Write 2–3 sentences for each viewpoint.

What to aim for

Both descriptions clearly refer to the same place.
Adult can distinguish the two moods.
Details reflect each child's viewpoint rather than just naming a feeling.

Response or adult observation notes

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Question 8Connecting character traits and events · core

Create a character profile for someone who repairs broken things. Include a strength, a weakness, a habit and a goal. Then write a 3-sentence scene in which the weakness creates a small problem.

What to aim for

The profile contains all four requested elements.
The scene demonstrates the weakness through an action.
Adult can connect the scene's problem with the profile.

Response or adult observation notes

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Question 9Choosing a narrative resolution · core

Ruby had planned a treasure hunt for the picnic. Then a gust of wind knocked the clue cards into a puddle.

Write two different possible endings to this beginning. Each ending should resolve the problem and be 3–4 sentences long.

What to aim for

Each ending responds to the wet clue cards.
The outcomes are meaningfully different.
Adult checks that neither ending introduces an unrelated magical rescue.

Response or adult observation notes

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Question 10Cohesion through word associations · support

Write a story paragraph about a lost dog returning to its owner. Use at least three related words from the same topic to connect your sentences, without repeating 'dog' in every sentence.

What to aim for

The paragraph has a clear sequence.
Adult identifies at least three useful related words.
Pronouns and alternate references clearly identify the same animal.

Response or adult observation notes

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Original Pi Leo Academy learning activities. This is an independent educational resource and is not affiliated with or endorsed by ACARA, NAPLAN or VCAA.

Write a 4–5 sentence story opening set at a school gate just before a storm. Introduce a character, use two senses and finish with a reason to keep reading.

Create a 4–6 sentence scene showing a character who is nervous about returning a borrowed book. Show the feeling through action and thought without using 'nervous' or 'scared'.

Write a conversation of 4–6 spoken turns between two children who discover an unfamiliar key in a garden. Give them different ideas about it and punctuate the dialogue.

Write one paragraph about a child who misses a bus and finds a safe solution. Use 'after', 'while' and 'eventually' to link events in a sensible order.

Write a short scene in which a character must choose between winning a game and being fair. Include the choice, the action and a consequence.

Write 5–7 sentences about finding a mysterious box during a shed clean-up. Build suspense before revealing an ordinary, believable object inside.

Describe the same empty playground twice: first through the eyes of a child looking forward to a game, then through the eyes of a child missing a friend. Write 2–3 sentences for each viewpoint.

Create a character profile for someone who repairs broken things. Include a strength, a weakness, a habit and a goal. Then write a 3-sentence scene in which the weakness creates a small problem.

Write two different possible endings to this beginning. Each ending should resolve the problem and be 3–4 sentences long.

Write a story paragraph about a lost dog returning to its owner. Use at least three related words from the same topic to connect your sentences, without repeating 'dog' in every sentence.

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