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Year 4 English

A Guide to Australian Backyard Birds

Writing · 40 minutes

1writing task

Informative writing task

Write an informative page for younger students about common birds they might see at home or school.

Planning space

  • Who is the audience?
  • What is the purpose?
  • What are three linked ideas or events?
  • Which vocabulary will make the meaning clearer?

Success criteria

  • Ideas are clear and linked.
  • The text structure suits the purpose.
  • Sentences are varied and easy to follow.
  • Vocabulary is precise and age-appropriate.
  • Spelling, punctuation and grammar are checked.
Text structure reminder

Introduction, grouped facts, headings and conclusion.

Parent or teacher marking guide

  • Purpose and audience are clear.
  • Ideas are developed with enough detail.
  • Paragraphs or sections help the reader follow the text.
  • Sentence punctuation and dialogue punctuation are checked.
  • Vocabulary choices suit Year 4 writing.
Developing

Ideas are present but may need clearer order, detail or sentence control.

Sound

Ideas are clear, mostly linked and supported by suitable vocabulary.

Strong

Ideas are well organised, engaging and edited for clarity and effect.

Curriculum links

Original Pi Leo Academy writing prompt and support material. This is an independent educational resource and is not affiliated with or endorsed by ACARA, NAPLAN or VCAA.

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