Year 4 English · Set 2 of 2

Writing and editing

5 questions and tasks · VC2E4LA09. Take your time, then check your work below.

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Question 11Coordinating sound, image and text · core

Plan a 30-second video inviting families to a class exhibition. Write three shots with spoken or on-screen words and sound choices. Make the event details easy to find without using real students' private information.

What to aim for
  • The plan includes an invitation and complete fictional event details.
  • Sound supports rather than competes with speech.
  • Adult checks viewers have enough time to read the final card.
Question 12Revising placement and salience · core
Draft poster: huge decorative star fills the centre; tiny text around edges says book swap, Friday lunch, Room 4; instruction to get permission at home is squeezed into a corner.

Revise a poster plan that hides the important details. Write improved wording, describe a new arrangement and explain which feature you made most noticeable.

What to aim for
  • The title, time and place are easy to locate in the plan.
  • The illustration supports the event without overpowering the information.
  • Adult checks the salience choice is explained.
Question 13Creating an accessible digital choice page · core

Create a one-page digital guide for students choosing a class reading activity. Give three activity links, a brief explanation of each and a plan for a helpful image. Explain how readers know where to start.

What to aim for
  • The three linked activities are distinct and clearly described.
  • The starting instruction and layout guide the reader.
  • Adult checks that the image supports the page without obscuring navigation.
Question 14Producing a complete digital exhibition text · extension

Draft a digital exhibition page for one piece of your own schoolwork. Include a title, a 50–70 word explanation, an image caption, two descriptive navigation links and a layout plan. Revise one part for visitors who do not know the project.

What to aim for
  • The explanation gives enough context for a new visitor.
  • Caption and image placement support the content.
  • Adult checks both links and one visitor-focused revision.
Question 15Creating and revising a complete picture-book plan · extension

Plan and write a complete six-page mini picture book for younger children about solving a small problem together. Give 1–3 sentences and an illustration plan for every page. Reread for a connected storyline and revise one page.

What to aim for
  • All six pages form a complete, connected story for younger readers.
  • Illustrations contribute information rather than merely decorating the text.
  • Adult checks that a revision strengthens clarity or the relationship between image and words.

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