Year 4 English · Set 1 of 4

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10 questions and tasks · VC2E4LA03. Take your time, then check your work below.

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Question 1Writing a complete realistic narrative · core

Write a complete 90–130 word story titled 'The Spare Seat'. Include a clear setting, a problem involving another person and a resolution caused by the main character's choice.

What to aim for
  • Adult checks for an orientation, a connected problem and a resolution.
  • The main character makes a meaningful choice.
  • Paragraphs and details help a reader follow the story.
Question 2Writing for a younger audience · extension

Create a 100–140 word original story for a younger reader called 'A Place for Everyone'. Use a clear beginning, connected events, dialogue and an ending that shows inclusion through action.

What to aim for
  • The story suits a younger audience and has a complete structure.
  • Characters act to include someone.
  • Adult checks that details, dialogue and ending support the same theme.
Question 3Structuring an information report · core
Fact notes: superb fairy-wren; small Australian bird; breeding adult males have bright blue patches; females mainly brown; eats mainly insects and other small invertebrates; shelters in dense low vegetation.

Write a short information report using the supplied facts. Include a title, an opening classification and two grouped sections with headings. Use your own sentences.

What to aim for
  • The opening identifies what kind of animal is described.
  • Facts are grouped under useful headings.
  • Adult checks that the supplied facts are represented accurately.
Question 4Writing a practical procedure · support

Write instructions for making a paper bookmark for a classmate. Include materials, 4–6 numbered steps and a time connective. Check that the steps can be followed in order.

What to aim for
  • Materials match the actions in the steps.
  • Steps begin with clear action verbs and follow a useful order.
  • Adult can follow the instructions without missing information.
Question 5Explaining a process from observations · core
Class observation: equal-sized ice cubes on matching plates; one plate in sun, one in shade; checked together after ten minutes; more liquid water and less remaining ice on the sunny plate.

Use the observations to write a 5–7 sentence explanation of what happened to the ice. Connect causes and results and distinguish what was observed from what you explain.

What to aim for
  • Adult checks that the reported observation matches the notes.
  • Cause-and-result language connects the ideas.
  • The explanation does not claim every sunny/shady setting always gives the same result.
Question 6Reporting a school event · core
Notes: Tuesday; Year 4; reading garden beside library; collected leaves; refilled two planters; cleaned tables; families donated potting mix and gloves; finished by lunchtime; weekly plant checks planned.

Write a school newsletter report of 70–90 words using the event notes. Include a headline and tell readers who, what, where, when and what happened as a result.

What to aim for
  • The headline and opening identify the event.
  • All supplied facts remain accurate.
  • Adult checks that the outcome is clear and no unsupported quotes are invented.
Question 7Comparing places for a purpose · core
Library: seats; quiet reading; books nearby; indoors and dry. Garden: seats; quiet reading allowed; fresh air; birds and playground sounds; exposed to rain.

Write a compare-and-contrast paragraph for students choosing a reading spot. Use at least two similarities and two differences from the notes, then give a sensible conclusion.

What to aim for
  • Adult finds two similarities and two differences.
  • The paragraph connects ideas rather than repeating separate lists.
  • The conclusion follows from the comparison.
Question 8Explaining a routine to a newcomer · core

Write a welcoming 60–80 word guide for a new Year 4 student explaining how your classroom morning routine could work. Include three steps and a friendly closing. Do not include private student information.

What to aim for
  • The routine has three clear steps.
  • The language is friendly and suitable for a new classmate.
  • Adult checks that the guide gives a way to get help.
Question 9Turning process notes into prose · support
Receive new book → record details → add location label → cover if needed → shelve for borrowing.

Turn the fact notes into an explanation with the heading 'How a Library Book Reaches the Shelf'. Use complete sentences and show the sequence.

What to aim for
  • All five stages appear in the right order.
  • The sentences explain the purpose of the label.
  • Adult checks that the text reads as an explanation rather than copied note fragments.
Question 10Writing an informative display label · core
Fictional museum record: handmade toy boat, 1962; wooden hull; sail from old cotton shirt; mismatched wheels fixed to sides as decoration; floated in backyard tub; made by a family member for a child.

Write a museum label of 50–70 words for the imaginary object described. Identify it, explain how it was used and point out one feature a visitor should notice.

What to aim for
  • The object, date and use match the supplied fictional record.
  • One visible feature is explained.
  • Adult checks the label is concise and suited to museum visitors.

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