Year 4 English · Set 2 of 4

Writing and editing

10 questions and tasks · VC2E4LA03. Take your time, then check your work below.

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Question 11Organising an FAQ · core
Garden helper notes: cans on shelf beside garden door; check soil; water when top feels dry under teacher guidance; report damaged plants to teacher.

Write three question-and-answer entries for a class garden FAQ. Use the supplied information and make each question something a new helper might ask.

What to aim for
  • The questions address three different practical needs.
  • Answers use the supplied information accurately.
  • Adult checks that every answer directly responds to its question.
Question 12Writing navigable digital information · core
Fictional excursion notes: Discovery Centre; Thursday 14 May; leave 9:15 am; return 2:30 pm; bring lunch, water bottle, hat; related pages: packing checklist and school excursion calendar.

Draft the words for a class excursion information webpage. Include a page title, three useful headings, brief information under each and two clearly named navigation links. Use the notes.

What to aim for
  • The page groups all supplied details logically.
  • Both link labels predict their destinations.
  • Adult checks that headings are more useful than vague labels such as 'More'.
Question 13Explaining survey results · core
Survey: one vote per student; drawing 10; board games 8; reading 6; only one Year 4 class surveyed.

Write a factual paragraph explaining the class survey results. Include a total, the most popular option, one comparison and a limit on what the survey tells us.

What to aim for
  • Numbers and comparison are accurate.
  • The paragraph identifies the most popular option.
  • Adult checks that the conclusion is limited to the surveyed group.
Question 14Writing conditional instructions · core

Write a troubleshooting guide for a class slideshow that will not play its sound. Use 'if' and 'unless' sensibly and give a safe final step if the checks do not work.

What to aim for
  • The checks follow a sensible order.
  • 'If' and 'unless' express correct conditions.
  • Adult checks that the guide ends with an appropriate way to seek help.
Question 15Revising an informative profile · core
Fictional interview notes: name Morgan; crossing supervisor; mornings near school; checks clear path; bright safety vest; careful observation; clear signals; enjoys greeting families.

Write a short profile of a fictional school crossing supervisor from the notes. Then reread it and move one sentence if needed so related ideas stay together. Explain your decision.

What to aim for
  • The profile includes role, preparation, skills and enjoyment.
  • Facts come from the fictional notes.
  • Adult checks that the revision decision concerns the order of ideas.
Question 16Explaining a classroom system · core

Write a 60–90 word explanation for younger students of how a class suggestion box works. Include how to submit an idea, how ideas are considered and why a suggestion may not be chosen.

What to aim for
  • The submission and review steps are clear.
  • A fair reason for declining or delaying an idea is included.
  • Adult checks the explanation suits a younger reader.
Question 17Writing and checking game rules · extension

Write a useful set of instructions for a two-player word game you invent. Include the aim, materials, starting rules, turns and an ending. Try explaining the rules to an adult and revise any gap.

What to aim for
  • Another person can identify when to start, take a turn and stop.
  • Rules include what happens when someone gets stuck.
  • Adult checks the learner made or considered a revision after explaining the game.
Question 18Supporting an opinion with reasons · support

Write a persuasive paragraph asking for a shaded reading area at school. State your view, give two distinct reasons and finish with a practical request.

What to aim for
  • A clear opinion appears early.
  • The two reasons explain different benefits.
  • Adult checks the closing request is practical and connected to the reasons.
Question 19Writing a formal proposal · core

Write a polite 70–100 word letter to a principal proposing a lunchtime drawing club. Include a greeting, benefits, a plan and a respectful closing.

What to aim for
  • The letter uses a suitable greeting and closing.
  • Benefits are supported by a manageable plan.
  • Adult checks the tone is respectful without demanding agreement.
Question 20Supporting a book recommendation · core
Fictional book: The Map in the Attic; two cousins; unfinished town map; connected clues; short chapters; slow introductory chapter; final solution withheld.

Write a review recommending or not recommending the fictional book described. Include a brief description without revealing the ending, a judgement and two supported reasons.

What to aim for
  • The review gives a clear recommendation and likely audience.
  • Two reasons use details from the description.
  • Adult checks that the ending is not invented or revealed.

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