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Question 11Writing and revising a complete explanation · extension

Write an 80–110 word explanation of how your class could organise a book swap. Include the preparation, event and follow-up. Use a conditional sentence, then reread and make one useful content or order change.

What to aim for

All three stages are clear and connected.
The conditional sentence addresses a plausible event.
Adult checks a revision improves essential content or order.

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Write an 80–110 word explanation of how your class could organise a book swap. Include the preparation, event and follow-up. Use a conditional sentence, then reread and make one useful content or order change.

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