Year 4 English · Set 4 of 4

Writing and editing

3 questions and tasks · VC2E4LY11. Take your time, then check your work below.

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Question 31Composing an audience-aware proposal · extension

Write a 90–120 word proposal for a class project that would help a new student feel welcome. Address your teacher, include two reasons and a practical plan, and revise the draft for a respectful tone.

What to aim for

Two distinct reasons support a specific project.
The plan explains who could do what.
Adult checks the learner can identify a tone-related revision or explain why the existing tone suits the audience.

Response or adult observation notes

Question 32Producing a complete digital exhibition text · extension

Draft a digital exhibition page for one piece of your own schoolwork. Include a title, a 50–70 word explanation, an image caption, two descriptive navigation links and a layout plan. Revise one part for visitors who do not know the project.

What to aim for

The explanation gives enough context for a new visitor.
Caption and image placement support the content.
Adult checks both links and one visitor-focused revision.

Response or adult observation notes

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Question 33Creating and revising a complete picture-book plan · extension

Plan and write a complete six-page mini picture book for younger children about solving a small problem together. Give 1–3 sentences and an illustration plan for every page. Reread for a connected storyline and revise one page.

What to aim for

All six pages form a complete, connected story for younger readers.
Illustrations contribute information rather than merely decorating the text.
Adult checks that a revision strengthens clarity or the relationship between image and words.

Response or adult observation notes

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Write a 90–120 word proposal for a class project that would help a new student feel welcome. Address your teacher, include two reasons and a practical plan, and revise the draft for a respectful tone.

Draft a digital exhibition page for one piece of your own schoolwork. Include a title, a 50–70 word explanation, an image caption, two descriptive navigation links and a layout plan. Revise one part for visitors who do not know the project.

Plan and write a complete six-page mini picture book for younger children about solving a small problem together. Give 1–3 sentences and an illustration plan for every page. Reread for a connected storyline and revise one page.

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